如何寫好初一期末英語作文分析

初一期末寫作指導

一basic rules (寫作規則)

1.信息提取—找全信息2.信息加工–- 重組信息 （適當的`加入細節）

3.列提綱—確定句式，關聯詞，過渡詞，較高級的句型和詞彙

方法一:善用詞彙 甚至善用高級詞彙

listened to the music on the beach.

B enjoyed the music on the beach.

A I wish you can help me.

B I’m looking forward to your help.

A They arrived early.

B They arrived as early as they could.

A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised.

B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.

A I think learning English is interesting.

B I find it really fun to learn English .

A We should protect the environment.

B It’s our duty to protect the environment.

方法二:活用多種句型

A She is very young.

She can’t carry the heavy box.

B She is too young to carry the heavy box.

C She is so young that she can’t carry the …

D She is not old enough to carry the…

表示並列或遞進: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor

2.表示選擇: or, either…or

3.表示轉折: but,however,although hough,after all,anyway

4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result

5.表示條件: if , unless

6.表示對比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one hand…on the other hand

7.表示解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth

8.表示順序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end

9.表示強調: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact

10.表示結論: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short

用恰當的連詞，連接下面各句。

How do people spend their vacationWe made a survey and here is our report.

According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

增加連接詞：How do people spend their vacationWe made a survey and here is our rding to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

美文賞析： We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to

visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

增加諺語後的效果。

According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, ―All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.‖ Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

諺語總結：

However, a few people have to work. ____________________________________________

As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes____________________________________________

Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People____________________________________________

who relax well work well. ____________________________________________

方法四:妙用引文和例子（多用於―第二段‖）

We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.

I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.

方法五 結尾：提出倡議或號召

Let’s …

Do it now ! / Don’t do it again!

As students, we should start from ourselves.

Don’t wait. Join us now!

Start to join us now!

Don’t put it off! Become a volunteer today!

How amazing! I can’t wait!

Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet!

Don’t hesitate(猶豫). It will be great fun!

怎樣保護動物的優美語句

1. we shouldn’t eat wild should keep them away from our dinner. In this way,there will not be wild animals on sale. I think the hunters and killers will become fewer and fewer.

2 We need to protect animals should give them fresh water to should make the forests bigger for animals in danger to live should advice people not to kill animals beacause they are our friends!

3 we should protect the should stop people from cutting trees down. Without trees, wild animals will lose their home. And we will lose our animal friends. All of us should try our best to protect animals.

有關音樂的優美語句

1. Almost everyone is fond of music.I am a music lover.

2. Listening to music is a hobby in my life.

ening to music will make me feel relaxed.

ever I feel sad, I can just turn on the radio and listen to some music.

c can cheer me up when I am sad.

ings of country people. Pop music can make us excited and happy.

7.I am willing to share their happiness and trouble. c comes from the heart and flows into the heart.

c is a kind of language that all the people in the world can understand it