My Seasons小學五年級英語作文

　　My Seasons

We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring, the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites when its wind. And I can go hiking with my family when its sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China, but its not long time. I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes, its often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is white. We can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season, because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.

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寫法：這篇短文是描述我的四季，在寫法上，是根據春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替來寫的，先講明每個季節的特徵，之後再寫在這個季節中的主要活動或比較有代表性的活動。同時講一些自己的真實感受，最後闡述自己最喜歡的季節。在實際的寫作的'時候我們還可以先寫出自己喜愛的季節及主要的活動內容，之後再去講其他幾個季節，還可以多講解一下地域的季節特徵和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地裏一片金黃，農民在收割等等，這樣寫出來的四季更貼近實際。